Minimal Wave Records

Hello. just stuck a track up. wanted some feedback good or bad. tis called jack shit. theres a few others but thats the latest. i think im in the right place.
thanks.
http://www.myspace.com/gophilip

Hey,

Beat, pads & general mood : good, correct tempo & interesting composition.

Bass : it’s kind of distorted/aliasing. Maybe it’s intended.

Voice : it is sometime off key. Also, it’s partly buried in the mix. Try cutting off some lower mids. Back-up vocals would help too.

Good work !

P-Pho

hey thanks, great feedback.  Vocals are a bit off key, that was originally just a guide but then i liked the vibe of it so i just went with it. Theres also a good bit of sibilance which is starting to annoy me.